2011. márc. 12.

Fogalmazás2: magamról

Chris (délelőtt) órájára mindenkinek meg kellett írnia a personal statement-jét, milyen ember is ő, hova tart, stb.
Az enyém elég személyes lett, és ismét nem fordítottam le magyarra, bocsi:



I feel that I have changed a lot in the last 3years. I might have grown-up even if a big part of me will always remain a child. Children can appretiate life’s little miracle, like clouds, snowflakes or a blade of grass. They look on a puddle as an exciting playground, not as a puddle which makes your boots wet and cold. They always say the truth and don’t know what this word means: lie. They smile, laugh, love without self-interest. I would like to keep alive this little child inside me.

Besides I am 26 years old. I know my strenghts and weaknesses too.
I am a hard-working person who usually tries to provide the maximum in her job. I like facing new challenges and making myself useful. According to my friends I have excellent organizational skills and I am a creative person.
I get on easily with other people, because I am friendly, open-minden and very liberal.
I am energetic and persistent, therefore I prefer active sports, like jogging, aerobic or zumba.
I love dogs, nature and spending time with my friends.
I have a tendency to think too much and I can be determinated.  

After working 4years for 2 different companies I realized, that the social convenctions, like money, career or titles which sounds good but means nothing dont make me happy. I don’t want a job, I want a vocation, that I could enjoy for my whole life. I am interested in psychology and helping other people, therefore I would like to move in this direction in the future.

I have almost lived a lot and also nothing. People always change and circumstances make them change. Maybe we might direct our lives but I don’t beliefe in the coincedences and what about faith? We will se…


Chris azt mondta, hogy a felesége is elolvasta aki szintén angoltanár, és neki is nagyon tetszett. Bemásolom ide a tanár kommentjét is, mert nagyon jólesett :) és mert kiválóan mutatja, hogy hogyan lehet nem lehúzóan kritikát mondani és felhívni a figyelmet a fejlesztendő területekre.
,,Excellent, a beautifully written, personal piece of work. Just a couple of prepositional changes and a bit of collocation - the most challenging areas :) - Well done, a pleasure to read Emőke."

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